i would tell you i love you
so loudly
the next-summer crickets would hear
if the gods turned out the lights
if they failed to hang the stars
because they got weepy drunk
one lonely winter night
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i would tell you i love you
so loudly
the next-summer crickets would hear
if the gods turned out the lights
if they failed to hang the stars
because they got weepy drunk
one lonely winter night
3 replies on “if the gods turned out the lights”
I like the next summer crickets and the way you project into the future.
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My goal was to imply they stopped chirping and turned their heads. Thank you.
mhm